Ek 3 ghante ki full crime–suspense–thriller script, Indian style, jisme desi dialogues + asli galiyan + underworld / police / betrayal.
🎥 Movie Concept (Draft)
Title: Andheri Galliyan
Genre: Crime | Suspense | Thriller | Underworld
Duration: ~3 hours
Act 1 – Shuruat (Setup) – ~1 hour
- Mumbai ke andheron me ek chhota-mota gangster “Raghu” ka rise hota hai.
- Uska ek dost aur partner hai “Sameer”, jo uska bhai jaisa hai.
- Police inspector “Deshmukh” uske peeche laga hai, par system bhi corrupt hai.
- Idhar ek “politician + don ka nexus” dikhaya jata hai.
- Dialogues full desi style me, galiyan bhi natural lagengi (MC/BC, “bhaad me jaa”, “madarchod neta”, etc).
Act 2 – Dhoka aur Raaz (Conflict) – ~1 hr
- Raghu ka apna banda hi usko dhoka de deta hai.
- Ek mystery murder hota hai jisme Raghu pe blame aa jata hai.
- Uske upar ek bada case ban jata hai.
- Raghu ko samajh aata hai ki uska dost hi police aur politician ke sath mila hua hai.
- Bhaga-daudi, goli-baarood, galiyan, thoda black humor bhi.
Act 3 – Climax (Resolution) – ~1 hr
- Suspense khulta hai ki jo murder hua tha uske peeche ek aur bhi bada raaz tha.
- Raghu aur Inspector Deshmukh ka final confrontation.
- Last me ek double twist: Raghu apne dost ko maar deta hai, lekin usse pehle pata chalta hai ki Deshmukh bhi system ka hissa tha.
- Film ek open-ended brutal climax pe khatam hoti hai – Raghu jail me ya encounter me, ya phir ek naye don ke roop me.
ANDHERI GALLIYAN
Genre: Crime | Suspense | Thriller
Setting: Mumbai – galliyan, docks, mills, chawls, clubs, police stations
Lead: Raghu (small-time enforcer) | Sameer (partner) | Insp. Deshmukh (cop) | Patkar (politician–don) | Meera (journalist) | Zara (bar singer)
PRIMARY CAST (quick)
- RAGHU: 28, street-smart, loyal, gussa tez, dil se seedha.
- SAMEER: 30, charming, “bhai”, dimaag se slick, loyalty questionable.
- INSP. DESHMUKH: 45, veteran, thaka hua, “system ka aadmi”, poker face.
- PATKAR: 55, corporator-turned-kingmaker, “service ke badle sharan”.
- ZARA: 26, bar singer, Raghu ki mohabbat, apna bhoot chhupa kar rakha.
- MEERA: 32, fearless journalist, sach ke peeche pagal.
- CHIMTA: 35, Patkar ka enforcer, sardonic, kaam se kaam.
ACT 1 — SETUP (~1 hr)
SCENE 1
EXT. DHARAVI GALLI – RAAT
Rain. Narrow lanes. Neon sign blink.
Raghu aur Sameer scooter par, helmets latkaaye, hawk-eyes.
SAMEER: (halki hansi) Upar se dekho to Mumbai sheeshe ki tarah chamakti… niche se dekho to gandi nali.
RAGHU: Nali me hi to machhli milti hai, bhai. Chalo, kaam pe.
Cut to: They stop outside a godown. Two guards smoke.
RAGHU: (hulke se) Dekh bhai, left waala pehle tootega.
SAMEER: (wink) MC ko right se pakadta hoon.
Ek beat. Raghu jhat se jaa kar guard ko wall pe thokta, Sameer dusre ko chokehold.
Thap-thap—door khulta—cash packets.
RAGHU: (faint smile) Teen minute. Nikal.
Sirens ka door ka echo. Dono bhaagte.
SCENE 2
INT. BAR “SHEESHA” – RAAT
Zara gaati hai, awaaz me dard. Raghu corner table. Sameer phone pe texts.
ZARA: (gaane ke baad Raghu ke paas) Phir late?
RAGHU: Kaam. Tu gaati reh, main bacha rahoon sabko.
ZARA: (teekhi) Hero mat bano, Raghu. Hero pehle marte hain.
Sameer taana maarta:
SAMEER: Aur heroine roti rehti hai. Chal nikalte.
Zara Raghu ko nazar se rokna chahti, par wo chal deta.
SCENE 3
INT. POLICE STATION – RATRI
Inspector Deshmukh file palat raha. Constable aata.
CONSTABLE: Sir, aaj dock pe cash pickup clean ho gaya. Koi leak?
DESHMUKH: (sookha) Leak? Mumbai khud leak hai. (pause) Raghu–Sameer pair ko pakdo. Par dikhna nahi chahiye ke hum jaan-bujh ke pakad rahe.
He stares at Raghu’s old photo, marker se ring.
DESHMUKH (V.O.): Tum dono ko system sikhaata hoon.
SCENE 4
EXT. MILL COMPOUND – SUBAH
Raghu–Sameer Chimta se milte.
CHIMTA: Patkar saab khush. Par ek aur kaam hai. Sensitive.
SAMEER: Paisa sensitive ho to hum bhi sensitive.
CHIMTA: (smirk) Ek journalist madarchod (Meera) bahut khod rahi. File chahiye uske laptop se. Aaj raat.
RAGHU: Aur agar wo ghar pe ho?
CHIMTA: Tab “samajhdaari” dikhana. Zyada awaaz nahi chahiye.
SCENE 5
INT. MEERA KA GHAR – RAAT
Meera keys ghumaati. Ghar andhera. Raghu–Sameer window se ghuste.
Meera light on—freeze—ek second ki aankhon ki ladai.
MEERA: Tum logon ko pata bhi hai kis ke peeche lage ho?
RAGHU: (thanda) Hume file chahiye. Bas.
MEERA: (smile) File nahi—mumbai ka sach. Patkar ke murder links, Deshmukh ki “deals”.
SAMEER: (unsettled) Abe kya bakwaas—
MEERA: (Raghu ko dekh ke) Tu alag hai. Par system kisi ko alag nahi chhodta.
Door bell. Police knock.
RAGHU: (fauran) Chup.
He shoves pen drive in pocket, Sameer curtains.
DESHMUKH (O.S.): Meera ji, formal baat. Darwaza.
Raghu Meera ko aankh se request—silent. Meera door kholti.
MEERA: Kya chahiye?
DESHMUKH: Bas khairiyat. (andar jhaankta; kuch mehsoos karta) Aajkal hamesha online rehti hain.
Unki nazar corner pe footprint pe jaati—kuch nahi kehta. Nikal padta.
SAMEER: (hiss) Ye buddha kuch pakad ke gaya.
RAGHU: (Meera se dheere) Tumhari file ab meri. Raat tak wapas ho sakti… agar sach ka wazan uthaya tumne.
SCENE 6
EXT. SEALINK VIEW – RAAT LATE
Scooter park. Breeze. Raghu pen drive dekhta.
SAMEER: De de Chimta ko.
RAGHU: Pehle dekhunga.
SAMEER: (taunt) Vakeel ban gaya kya, bh***?
RAGHU: (calm) Agar isme kuch garam nikla to hum file nahi bechenge, becha jaayega humko.
Ek chhota scuffle. Par Raghu apni jagah banaye rakhta.
SCENE 7
INT. RAGHU KA CHAWL ROOM – RAAT
Zara wait kar rahi. Raghu pen drive laptop me.
Screens: photos of Patkar with gangsters, Deshmukh meeting offshore “fixers”, murder ledger.
ZARA: Ye sab dekh ke kya karega?
RAGHU: (thanda) Jo sahi hoga.
ZARA: (akkad) Sahi? Sahi ka rate yahan sabse zyada hai.
Phone buzz. Private number.
DESHMUKH (PHONE): Tere paas kuch hai jo mera bhi hai. Subah 5 baje, Sion bridge. Akela.
RAGHU: Aur agar na aaya?
DESHMUKH: To jo pyaar karta hai na—wo sabse pehle dard leta hai.
Call cut. Raghu Zara ko dekhta—samajh jaata Deshmukh ne threat kis par diya.
RAGHU: (Zara se) Darna mat. Main hoon.
SCENE 8
EXT. SION BRIDGE – SUBAH PEHLE
Fog. Deshmukh car. Raghu akele. Do plainclothes cops.
DESHMUKH: Pen drive.
RAGHU: Guarantee?
DESHMUKH: Guarantee ki gaand? Ye Mumbai hai.
Raghu pass karta hi hai—sniper red dot briefly Raghu ke seene par—Deshmukh haath se signal rokta.
DESHMUKH: (soft) Tu smart hai. System se ladna mat.
RAGHU: System kharida hua hai. (nazar mila kar) Kisko becha tha hume?
Ek lamha—Deshmukh chhota sa smile.
DESHMUKH: Jisse sab bechte hain—apni jaan. Chal nikal.
Raghu jaata—par chhoti duplicate pen drive apne paas rakhta. (Twist seed)
SCENE 9
INT. PATKAR’S BUNGALOW – DIN
Patkar, Chimta, Sameer. Deshmukh enters.
PATKAR: File aa gayi?
DESHMUKH: (rakh deta) Aur aadmi bhi.
SAMEER: (sweat) Koi problem to nahi?
PATKAR: Problem? Tu toh mere liye solution tha, Sameer. (pause) Na?
DESHMUKH: (casual) Raghu ko uske “pyaar” se bandha ja sakta hai. Zara.
CHIMTA: (hansi daba ke) Mohabbat—sabse sasti kamzori.
Sameer aankhen churaata. (Seed of betrayal)
SCENE 10
INT. BAR “SHEESHA” – RAAT
Zara stage pe. Raghu aata—Zara ki aankhon me concern.
ZARA: Tum kisi aag me kood gaye ho.
RAGHU: (soft) Tere liye sab.
ZARA: (hichakti) Raghu… mujhe tumse ek baat—
Patkar ke aadmi ghus aate hain. Commotion. Raghu ko corner.
GOON: Chal bh***, Patkar saab bula rahe.
Raghu ek ko headbutt, doosre ko chair—maar-peet raw, galiyan.
Zara cheekhti. Police siren—sab bhaag. Raghu bhi nikalta, par dekhta: Zara ke bag me mic-transmitter chip.
RAGHU: (shock) Ye kya hai?
ZARA: (ro dete hue) I’m sorry… main force nahi hoon… par mujhe kisi ne majboor kiya. Woh log—
RAGHU: (tut-tut) Kaun log?
Zara khamosh. Raghu ke chehre par trust ka bhanwar.
RAGHU: (sookha) Bas. Ab game simple nahi raha.
END ACT 1
ACT 2 — DANGAL & DHOKA (~1 hr)
SCENE 11 (FULL)
EXT. DOCKS – RAAT
Rain sheets. Raghu, Sameer pick-up ke liye. Chhupa hua police van. Deshmukh walkie.
DESHMUKH: (low) “Mouse is out.”
Chimta ke log fire khol dete. Goliyaan. Raghu Sameer ko dhakelta—
RAGHU: Cover le, BC!
SAMEER: (rattled) Yeh sab kisliye?
RAGHU: Kyunki kisi ne rasta khol diya.
Raghu ek goon ko pakadkar puchta—
GOON: (khoon ugalte) Address… Kanjurmarg… Basement… (mar jata)
SAMEER: Kya sun liya?
RAGHU: Apni maut ka pin code.
They flee.
SCENE 12 (FULL)
INT. KANJURMARG SAFEHOUSE – RAAT
Basement me files, laptops, money. Raghu duplicate pen drive plug karta.
Screen pe Meera’s expose draft: “SEAT OF BLOOD: Patkar’s Election Murders / Deshmukh’s cleanups”.
Door slam. SAMEER gun point.
SAMEER: Pen drive de de.
RAGHU: (steady) Tu mere sath tha.
SAMEER: (cold) Tha. Par bhook sabki maa hoti. Patkar ne future likh diya mera.
RAGHU: (hurt) Madarchod saala… tu ne Meera ka ghar tip-off kiya?
SAMEER: (shrug) Sab business hai. Tu dil se khelta, main dimaag se.
RAGHU: (ghussa) Aur dimaag se hi apne bhai ko bech dega?
SAMEER: (ek beat; aankh pherti) Bhai? Bhai ka matlab?
RAGHU: (narmi se) Tumhare bina main kuch nahi. Par aaj se tum mere liye kuch nahi.
Ek micro-second ki gun-standoff. Zara aati—
ZARA: Band karo! Dono!
SAMEER: (smirk) Dekh, teri mohabbat mere side pe hai.
Zara aankh jhukaati—par achanak Raghu ki taraf tilt: ek nazar me “trust me”.
She flicks light—room black out—Raghu Sameer ke haath se pistol kick.
Hathapai. Zara Raghu ko file throw karti—
ZARA: Bhaag!
Raghu window se nikalta. Sameer peeche goli chalata—miss.
SCENE 13 (FULL)
INT. MEERA NEWSROOM – SUBAH
Meera type kar rahi. Raghu and Inside.
MEERA: Tum laay?
RAGHU: (rakh deta) Par meri ek shart—Ye chhapega to tu safe nahi rahegi.
MEERA: (muskurahat) Main kab se safe thi?
RAGHU: (faint) Mera dost… Sameer—andar se saare links uske paas hain.
MEERA: (pause) Deshmukh ne tumhe Sion bridge pe retire kyu nahi kar diya?
RAGHU: (eyes) Kyunki main uske kaam ka hoon… ya kisi aur ke kaam ka.
Phone rings—unknown. Meera pick.
VOICE (MODULATED): Agar aaj raat tak wo draft bahar gaya… to tum dono ki laash milni mushkil ho jayegi.
Call cut.
Meera looks at Raghu.
MEERA: Publish karte hain. Bas plan chahiye.
SCENE 14 (FULL)
INT. PATKAR BUNGALOW – WAR ROOM – SHAAM
Large map. Deshmukh, Patkar, Sameer, Chimta.
PATKAR: Meera ko khatm karo. Aur Raghu—usse “example” banao.
DESHMUKH: Kaam clean chahiye.
SAMEER: (thanda) Main sambhaal loonga.
PATKAR: (Sameer ke kandhe par) Beta jaise ho. Par yaad rakhna—jo beta zyada smart ho jaye na, usko pehle ghar se nikala jata.
Sameer forced-smile. Dar uski aankhon me.
SCENE 15 (FULL)
EXT. BYCULLA FLYOVER – RAAT
Traffic din. Meera car, Raghu bike escort.
Suddenly truck rams. Car spin. Raghu skid—blood.
Mask men approach to finish. Raghu uth kar brutal takedown—
RAGHU: (growl) Aao be… ek-ek karke.
Do aadmi behoshi. Teesra bhaagta. Raghu pakad ke wall pe:
RAGHU: Kiske liye?
HITMAN: (darta) Patkar… par order kisne diya—Sameer!
Raghu jam jaata. Eyes dead. Chhod deta—
RAGHU: (to himself) Teri maut sign ho gayi, saale.
Meera injured par conscious.
MEERA: (fissured smile) Headline ban gayi kya?
RAGHU: Abhi sirf preface likha hai.
SCENE 16 (FULL)
INT. ZARA KA KAMRA – MIDNIGHT
Zara bandage karti Raghu ko.
ZARA: Main majboor thi. Deshmukh ke log mere pichle case ka fayda utha rahe. Agar main chip nahi lagati to—
RAGHU: (soft) Bas. Ab aur nahi.
ZARA: (tears) Main tere saath hoon.
RAGHU: Kal subah tak Meera ka draft live hoga. Uske baad ya to Mumbai hilega… ya hum gir jayenge.
ZARA: (whisper) Agar gira, to saath girenge.
They hold hands.
SCENE 17 (FULL — PIVOT)
INT. DESHMUKH’S HOUSE – SUBAH
Simple home. Family photos. Raghu quietly enters (door ajar; trap?). Deshmukh dining table pe chai.
DESHMUKH: (bina dekhe) Doodh me cheeni kam, goli me barood zyada.
RAGHU: (aage badhkar) Kyu? Kyu itna ganda?
DESHMUKH: Sach? (muskurata) Kyunki main akela hoon. Aur akela aadmi ya to bikta hai ya tut jata.
RAGHU: (dheere) Tumne mere bhai ko kab becha?
DESHMUKH: (freeze; slow smile) Tu samajh gaya. Tera chhota bhai—teen saal pehle “encounter”… main hi lead tha. Patkar ka order. Sameer ne tip diya tha.
RAGHU: (saans rukti) SAMEER—?
DESHMUKH: Haan. Tere ghar ka bhediya ghar ka hi nikla.
Raghu ki aankhon me laava. Gun nikalta—
DESHMUKH: Maar de. System ek naya Deshmukh paida kar lega. Par agar dimaag se khele… to system ko apni hi goli khilayega.
RAGHU: (teeth) Plan?
DESHMUKH: Patkar aaj “Mill Redevelopment” deal sign karega. Sab wahan. Agar us waqt Meera ka expose live gaya—aur tu andar se sabko jode—game khatam.
RAGHU: Tu kyun help?
DESHMUKH: (khaali hansi) Kyunki main thak gaya. Aur shayad… apna hisaab barabar karna hai.
RAGHU: (cold) Tere hisaab me mera bhai bhi hai.
Deshmukh nods—guilt visible.
RAGHU: (narmi) Deal. Par agar double-cross kiya—main bhagwan nahi, seedha MC ban jaunga.
Handshake. Uneasy alliance.
END ACT 2
ACT 3 — CLIMAX & DOUBLE TWIST (~1 hr)
SCENE 18 (FULL)
EXT. ABANDONED MILL – SHAAM
Huge stage. Politicians, builders, press. Zara crowd me blend. Meera van me live-switch. Raghu backstage. Deshmukh outer ring.
PATKAR: (stage pe) Mumbai ko nayi roshni denge—
Meera signals—EXPOSE GOES LIVE on big media portals. Screens flash: “PATKAR–DESHMUKH MURDER–MONEY NEXUS”. Crowd gasps.
PATKAR: (frozen) Kaun sa harami—
SAMEER: (side, furious to Chimta) Backup plan!
Chimta goons fire warning shots. Stampede.
Raghu stage ke niche se nikal kar Sameer ko corner karta.
RAGHU: Bas khatam.
SAMEER: (hassi) Tu late hai. Patkar ne tumhare liye gift bheja—Zara.
Raghu palat—Zara pe gunpoint by a goon.
RAGHU: Use chhod… saale!
SAMEER: Trigger khinchne me aadmi ko do cheeze rok sakti—ya to pyaar, ya maut ka darr. Tere paas pehla zyada hai.
Raghu slow holster down karta. Suddenly ZARA apne goon ko ELBOW + KNEE, gun drop—
ZARA: Bh***, main item nahi.
Raghu flip karta—Sameer ki wrist tod—gun on Sameer.
SAMEER: Bhai… galti ho gayi.
RAGHU: (blank) Galti school me hoti. Yahan hisaab hota.
SAMEER: (darta) Mat maar… main sab khol doon—Patkar ka Swiss account, Deshmukh ki—
RAGHU: (ice-cold) Deshmukh ab meri taraf hai. Tu?
SAMEER: Main bhi ho sakta—
RAGHU: Tu kabhi kabhi tha. Par ab kabhi nahi.
GUNSHOT. Sameer down. Raghu’s face stone.
Zara shakes. Meera on comms:
MEERA: Patkar bhaag raha factory floor se!
SCENE 19 (FULL)
INT. MILL – FACTORY FLOOR – CONTINUOUS
Metal maze. Steam. Patkar bhaagta. Deshmukh cut-off karta.
PATKAR: Tu? Main tujhe banaya—
DESHMUKH: (low) Isi liye tod raha.
Chimta peeche se attack. Deshmukh aur Raghu sandwich. Brutal fight—chains, pipes.
Chimta zakhmi, ghutne pe.
CHIMTA: (thook) Hero log… kal akhbar me photo ache aayenge.
Deshmukh ek second ke liye Raghu ko dekhta—then shoots Chimta dead.
DESHMUKH: Ek hisaab kam.
Patkar stairwell pe. Raghu chase. Patkar top me HOSTAGE MEERA.
PATKAR: Pen drive ke bina ye sab hawa.
RAGHU: (smirk) Hawa me aag lag chuki. Aur pen drive—(pockets) do thi.
PATKAR: Tujhe lagta hai tu bachega?
RAGHU: (aankhon me khoon) Bachunga? Nahi pata. Par tu aaj nahi bachega.
Patkar Meera ke gale pe blade—Deshmukh slowly approach peeche se.
RAGHU: (distract) Arre neta ji, aap ke haath kaanp rahe? Umar ho gayi.
Patkar jhatka—Deshmukh ka clean shoulder shot—Meera free—Raghu rush, elbow—Patkar railings ke pass.
PATKAR: System… system—
RAGHU: System? (push) System ko aaj neeche dekh.
Patkar falls—industrial floor pe fatal drop.
Sirens. Media. Expose already viral.
SCENE 20 — DOUBLE TWIST (FULL)
Police swarm. ACPs, press. Deshmukh Raghu ke saath niche aata.
Ek senior officer approach—handcuffs nikalta—par Meera bol padti:
MEERA: Deshmukh saab, aap ka statement? Aap to Patkar ke saath the.
Crowd turns.
RAGHU: (shock) Arre—
DESHMUKH: (thanda sa smile) Statement? (to cops) Arrest him.
COPS: Kisko?
DESHMUKH: Raghu ko. Murder of Patkar. Possession of illegal arms. And… (soft) My “undercover assistance” ne isko pakadne me madad ki.
RAGHU: (stunned) Tu…
DESHMUKH: Maine kaha tha—system ko usi ki goli khilani hai. Tu goli tha. Main trigger.
Meera furious:
MEERA: Par expose me tumhara naam bhi—
DESHMUKH: (phone dikhaata) Counter-narrative live ho gaya: “Deshmukh infiltrates Patkar gang, helps bring him down.”
Media angles shift; headlines split. System apne ko dhota.
Raghu aankhon me aag—fight back karta, cuffs se pehle do cops ko dodge, bhaagna—
Zara bheed me—Raghu ko nazar milti—
ZARA: (shout) Bhago!
Raghu vanishing act into crowd/alleys.
Deshmukh slow clap.
DESHMUKH: (V.O.) Game khatam nahin. Bas round change.
SCENE 21 — EPILOGUE (FULL)
EXT. MUMBAI SEAFACE – SUBAH
Pink dawn. Meera paper padhe: “PATKAR DEAD. COP A HERO?”
She crumples. Zara aati.
ZARA: Raghu?
MEERA: Zinda hai. Par sheher uska dushman ho gaya.
Phone buzz—unknown photo—Raghu in shadow, message: “Main wapas aunga. System ko goli ya sach — kisi ek se phodunga.”
MEERA: (thin smile) Teesra adhyay baaki.
Camera pulls back—Mumbai ka skyline—waves crash.
CUT TO BLACK.
THE END
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