"Aakhri
Passenger"
Genre: Horror / Suspense
Length: 10–12 minutes
Location: Empty bus at night + deserted road
Cast:
- Ravi (25, bus
conductor, tired)
- Driver—Shyamlal (50, seasoned
but superstitious)
- Unknown Woman (20s, pale,
strange smile)
- Extra: 1–2 background
passengers for start scene
SCENE 1 — EXT. BUS STOP – NIGHT
Wide
shot:
Flickering yellow streetlight, empty road, wind rustling dry leaves.
Bus halts, brakes hiss.
Driver
(Shyamlal):
"Bas Ravi, yeh aakhri trip hai. Jaldi wapas chalte hain."
Ravi:
"Sirf ek passenger bacha hai, utarte hi niklenge."
SCENE 2—INT. BUS—CONTINUOUS
Visual: Only 2–3 passengers,
all sleepy. One by one they get down.
Finally, only one figure remains—a young woman in white salwar,
sitting in the back seat, head down.
Ravi
(walking towards her):
"Madam, last stop aa gaya. Utarna hai?"
Woman
(slowly looks up):
"Main… aakhri tak jaaungi."
Her
voice is soft… too soft.
SCENE 3 — ROAD DRIVE – FEW MINUTES
LATER
Visual: Bus moving through
pitch-black highway, no streetlights.
The woman hasn’t moved an inch, still staring out the window.
Ravi
(to Driver):
"Sir, yeh ladki ajeeb hai. Ticket bhi cash me di, serial number purana sa
lagta hai."
Driver
(frowning):
"Bas chup chaap baith. Aakhri trip pe zyada sawal mat kar."
SCENE 4—ODD BEHAVIOUR
Visual: Ravi notices the
woman’s feet—they aren’t touching the ground. They’re slightly above
the floor.
He blinks, looks again—now they’re normal.
Ravi
(muttering):
"Shayad thakaan hai…"
SCENE 5—MIDWAY HALT
The driver stops bus near a small tea stall.
Driver:
"Main chai leke aata hoon. Tu dekh passenger ka dhyaan rakhe."
Ravi
turns — woman is gone.
Ravi
(shocked):
"Arre… abhi toh yahi thi!"
He
runs to the aisle — finds her sitting in the last seat again, smiling
faintly.
Woman:
"Main kabhi jaati nahi… Ravi."
Ravi
freezes:
"Aapko mera naam kaise pata?"
SCENE 6 — THE REVEAL
Lights
flicker inside bus. Outside, tea stall guy runs to driver:
Tea
Stall Guy:
"Arre bhai, aapki bus me koi aur passenger mat bithaana raat ko… do saal
pehle ek ladki ka yahin accident hua tha. Tab se… aakhri bus me milti
hai."
Driver
turns pale:
"Kya?!"
SCENE 7 — FINAL HORROR
Inside
bus:
Ravi backs away from woman. Her face is now pale, eyes black, faint blood at
temple.
Woman
(whispering):
"Main… aakhri passenger hoon."
She
suddenly vanishes, leaving only the old ticket fluttering in the air.
Driver
rushes in:
"Kahan gayi?!"
Ravi:
"Sir… chalna yahan se."
As the bus starts moving, the camera pans to the last seat—a woman is sitting there again,
smiling at the camera.
Fade
to black.
SFX: Bus horn + faint whisper: "Aakhri tak jaaungi…"
Themes & Shoot Notes
- 1 Location: Old bus + 1
roadside tea stall.
- Lighting: Flickering tube
light in bus, low warm light outside.
- Sound Design: Bus engine
rumble, wind howling, faint whispering layered in background.
- Makeup: Pale face +
minimal ghost FX (black contact lenses if possible).
- Length Control: Keep pauses +
suspense to stretch runtime to 10–12 min.
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