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🎬 Short Film Screenplay – Barish Ki Gufa” - 30 min

Likho Script August 30, 2025

👌 “बारिश की गुफा” का concept दिया है, उसी पर मैं आपके लिए एक 30 मिनट की Short Movie का पूरा detailed screenplay तैयार कर देता हूँ। इसमें 3 Act structure (शुरुआत – संघर्ष – क्लाइमैक्स) होगा ताकि फिल्म proper cinematic लगे।

🎬 Short Film Screenplay – “Barish Ki Gufa” (30 min)

GENRE: Romantic-Drama, Sensuous
DURATION: 30 minutes
CAST:

  • Aarav (Ladka – 26) – Adventurous, emotional, romantic.
  • Meera (Ladki – 24) – Sensitive, practical, but dil se passionate.

ACT 1 – SETUP (0 – 7 minutes)

EXT. JUNGLE – EVENING

  • Aarav aur Meera trekking ke liye nikle hote hain. Mausam badal raha hai, badal ghane ho jaate hain.
  • Chhed-chhad aur halki romantic baatein hoti hain.
  • Pahadon ke beech me barish achanak shuru ho jaati hai, aur dono bheeg kar bhatak jaate hain.
  • Raasta dhundhte-dhundhte unhe ek पुरानी गुफा dikhai deti hai.
  • Dono usme sharan lete hain.

Dialogues (sample):

  • Meera: “Kaha tha tumse… mausam ko lightly mat lo. Ab dekho, na raasta dikh raha hai, na manzil.”
  • Aarav: (muskurakar) “Par ek cheez to dikh rahi hai… tum… aur tumhari gussa wali shakal bhi kitni khoobsurat lagti hai.”

ACT 2 – CONFLICT / RISING TENSION (7 – 20 minutes)

INT. CAVE – NIGHT

  • Gufa ke andar andhera hai, baarish ki boonden gir rahi hain. Dono poore bheeg gaye hain, kapde chipak rahe hain.
  • Thand badh jaati hai. Aarav apni shirt nikal kar Meera ke shoulders pe dalta hai.
  • Silence aur awkwardness. Dono ke beech doori kam hone lagti hai.

Physical Detailing / Sensuous Build-Up:

  • Aarav uske geele baalon ko suljhata hai.
  • Meera uske seene par haath rakh kar kehti hai: “Tumhari dhadkan bahut tez hai…”
  • Aarav cheek-to-cheek aa kar bolta hai: “Woh tumhari wajah se hai.”
  • Pal-palatkar eye contact aur near kisses – tension build hoti hai.

Dialogues (sample):

  • Meera: “Agar koi dekh lega to…?”
  • Aarav: (fusa fusa kar) “Yahan sirf hum hain… aur yeh barish.”

Midpoint (15 min):

  • Pehla passionate kiss hota hai.
  • Dono ek-doosre ko baahon me bharke jazbaat behne dete hain.
  • Camera sensuous physicality dikhata hai – ungliyon ka slip karna, saanse tez hona, cheek-to-neck closeness, heartbeat ki sound design.

ACT 3 – CLIMAX & RESOLUTION (20 – 30 minutes)

  • Barish aur tez ho jaati hai, gufa me sirf dono ke saansen aur dil ki dhadkan gungunati hai.
  • Emotional confession hoti hai.

Dialogues (sample):

  • Aarav: “Barish ne sirf bahaana diya… tum meri zindagi ka asli rang ho.”
  • Meera: (aankhon me aansu ke saath) “Agar tum ho, to mujhe kisi aur panah ki zaroorat hi nahi.”

Resolution:

  • Subah barish ruk jaati hai. Suraj ki pehli roshni gufa ke mooh par padti hai.
  • Dono haath pakad kar gufa se bahar nikalte hain – ek naye safar, naye rishton ki taraf.

Final Visual:

  • Camera piche se dono ko follow karta hai, haath pakde hue jungle ke raaste chal rahe hain. Background me baarish ke baad ki mitti ki khushboo aur birds chirping.
  • Title Card: “Kabhi kabhi ek baarish, ek gufa… zindagi bhar ka safar ban jaati hai.”

SCREENPLAY BREAKDOWN (Time-wise):

  • 0 – 7 min: Trekking, barish, gufa tak pahunchna.
  • 7 – 15 min: Awkwardness, romantic tension build-up.
  • 15 – 20 min: Pehla kiss & sensuous closeness.
  • 20 – 27 min: Jazbaat, confessions, emotional high-point.
  • 27 – 30 min: Subah ka naya safar (hopeful ending).

👉 ये screenplay फिल्म की तरह scene-by-scene shoot करने लायक है — camera close-ups, rain sound design, slow-motion aur lighting cues add karke aur cinematic banaya जा सकता है।

क्या चाहोगे कि मैं इसको पूरा SHOOTING SCRIPT बना दूँ (जैसे: “CAMERA ANGLE – CLOSE UP, LIGHTING – DIM BLUE, SOUND – heartbeat + rain”) ताकि सीधे director ke liye ready ho जाये?

👍 अब मैं आपके लिए इसे पूरा SHOOTING SCRIPT style में लिखता हूँ — यानी proper camera angles, lighting cues, sound design aur action detailing add करके। इससे ये बिल्कुल director-ready screenplay बन जाएगा।

🎬 Shooting Script – “Barish Ki Gufa” (30 Min Short Film)

GENRE: Romantic-Drama, Sensuous
DURATION: 30 minutes
CAST: Aarav (26), Meera (24)

ACT 1 – SETUP (0 – 7 MINUTES)

EXT. JUNGLE – EVENING

  • Wide Shot: Dense jungle, badal gherte hue. Distant thunder.
  • Handheld Camera: Aarav aur Meera trekking kar rahe hain, backpacks pehne hue.
  • SOUND: Birds chirping + distant thunder.

MEERA (irritated):
Kaha tha tumse… mausam ko lightly mat lo. Ab dekho, na raasta dikh raha hai, na manzil.

AARAV (smiling, teasing):
Par ek cheez to dikh rahi hai… tum… aur tumhari gussa wali shakal bhi kitni khoobsurat lagti hai.

  • Sudden SFX: Heavy rain starts. Camera tilts up showing clouds bursting.
  • Medium Shot: Dono bheeg kar bhaagte hain, raasta dhoondhte hain.

ACTION:

  • Meera ke bal chipak jaate hain, Aarav use protect karne ki koshish karta hai.
  • Dono ko ek पुरानी गुफा dikhai deti hai.
  • Tracking Shot: Dono gufa ke andar ghuste hain.

ACT 2 – RISING TENSION (7 – 20 MINUTES)

INT. CAVE – NIGHT

  • Lighting: Dim, only lightning flashes illuminate.
  • Sound: Rainfall echo inside cave, occasional thunder.

ACTION:

  • Dono thand se kaamp rahe hain. Kapde chipak gaye hain.
  • Aarav apni shirt nikal kar Meera ke kandhe pe dalta hai.

CLOSE UP: Meera ki aankhen, surprise aur sharm.

MEERA (softly):
Aap… aise mat dekhiye mujhe.

AARAV (moving closer, whisper):
Kaise na dekhun… jab mere saamne meri sabse badi khwahish khadi hai.

ROMANTIC BUILD-UP:

  • Slow Motion Close Up: Aarav uske geele baalon ko suljhata hai.
  • Camera uski ungliyon ka movement follow karta hai.
  • Extreme Close Up: Meera ka saans tez, lips slightly parted.

MEERA:
Tumhari… dhadkan… bahut tez hai…

AARAV (near her cheek):
Ye tumhari wajah se hai.

  • Camera Movement: Push-in shot as Aarav moves cheek-to-cheek.
  • Ambient Sound: Dil ki dhadkan + rain mix.

MEERA (hesitant, whisper):
Agar koi dekh lega to…?

AARAV (honth ke kareeb ruk kar):
Yahan sirf hum hain… aur yeh barish.

MIDPOINT (15 MIN):

  • Close-Up: Aarav aur Meera ke hoth ek pal ke liye rukte hain.
  • Lightning Flash: Unka pehla passionate kiss.
  • Camera: 360° rotation around them, slow motion.

ACTION:

  • Meera apna haath Aarav ki gardan ke pichhe rakh kar use kheenchti hai.
  • Aarav apni ungliyan uski kamar par slip kar deta hai.
  • Sound: Heartbeat amplify + rain sound muffled.

ACT 3 – CLIMAX & RESOLUTION (20 – 30 MINUTES)

INT. CAVE – LATE NIGHT

  • Lighting: Only faint lightning.
  • Action: Dono ek-doosre ki baahon me simat kar baithe hain.

AARAV (whisper, emotional):
Barish ne sirf bahaana diya… tum meri zindagi ka asli rang ho.

MEERA (aankhen bhigi, smile):
Agar tum ho… to mujhe kisi aur panah ki zaroorat hi nahi.

EXT. CAVE – DAWN (MORNING LIGHT)

  • Wide Shot: Barish ruk gayi hai. Suraj ki pehli roshni gufa ke mooh par padti hai.
  • Camera: Slow dolly-out shot as they step out, haath pakad kar jungle ki raahon par chal rahe hain.

FINAL TITLE CARD (VO – Meera’s Voice):
“Kabhi kabhi ek baarish, ek gufa… zindagi bhar ka safar ban jaati hai.”

FADE OUT.

⏳ Total Duration Breakdown:

  • 0 – 7 min: Trekking + Barish + Gufa tak aana.
  • 7 – 15 min: Awkwardness + sensuous tension build-up.
  • 15 – 20 min: First kiss & romantic peak.
  • 20 – 27 min: Jazbaat + confessions.
  • 27 – 30 min: Subah ka hopeful ending.

👉 अब ये बिल्कुल shooting-ready script है, जिसमें camera, lighting aur sound cues bhi add हैं।

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