🎬 3-Minute
Angry Monologue (Lawrence Bishnoi Style)
(Roman Hindi, cinematic tone)
[Background: Silent
pause → Phir dheere-dheere drum beat shuru hoti hai. Camera close-up Lawrence
ke chehre par. Uski saans tez hai, aankhen laal, gusse se bhari.]
Lawrence (dheere tone
me, phir dheere-dheere tez hota hua):
*"Sunte reh…
Jisne bhi kale hirna ko goli maari na… usne sirf ek jaanwar nahi maara, usne
meri kaum ka dil cheer diya.
Kale hirna ko maarne wala samjhta hai usne shikar kiya hai… par asal me usne
apni maut likh di hai.
[Pause, camera zoom in
on eyes]
Tu sochta hai tu shikari
hai…
Par shikar tu khud ban chuka hai.
Meri kaum ke liye kale hirna sirf ek jaanwar nahi hai, woh bhagwan hai… aur
bhagwan pe hath uthana matlab Lawrence Bishnoi ke khilaf jang kholna.
[Background music
intensifies, dialogues tez hote hain]
Main Lawrence Bishnoi…
aur sun le…
Jo bhi kale hirna pe goli chalata hai, main uski saanse tod deta hoon.
Jo uski jaan leta hai, main uski zindagi ka hisaab leta hoon.
Sun sab…
Kaale hirna ko chhune wale ke haath kat jaayenge.
Uski saanse band kar dunga main.
Aur uska naam, uski pehchaan… mitti me mila dunga.
[Camera cuts → Lawrence
ke haath gusse me kaap rahe hain]
Tu samajh ke baitha hai
kanoon tujhe bachayega?
Kanoon ke kagaz sirf tareeke hote hain… par Lawrence ka faisla maut hota hai.
Aur yeh faisla main de chuka hoon.
[Background: drums peak,
firelight reflection on his face]
Meri kaum ke bhagwan ka
khoon bahaane wale…
Tera khoon mitti pe girne tak yeh jang khatam nahi hogi.
Kasam hai mujhe…
Jab tak tu zinda hai, Lawrence Bishnoi chain se nahi baithega.
Aur jab tu marega…
Poora duniya dekhegi ke kale hirna ka badla kya hota hai.
[Pause, gusse se bhari
awaaz, aankh me aansu jhalakti hai]
Sun lo sab…
Kale hirna ki goli chalane wala, ab khud goli khayega.
Aur woh goli, main chalayunga.
Yeh meri kasam hai…
Lawrence Bishnoi ki kasam.
Aur meri kasam… kabhi tootti nahi."*
⏱️ Ye monologue
approx 3 minutes ke screen time ke liye likha gaya hai (slow
delivery, pauses, background music ke saath).
🎬 Cinematic Screenplay – 3 Minute Angry
Monologue
Title: Bishnoi: Shohrat aur Saaza
Scene Type: Angry Monologue
Location: Andhera adda / Jail interrogation room
Opening
(0:00 – 0:30)
- Camera: Wide
shot – Lawrence ek kursi par baitha hai, andhere room me. Sirf ek bulb
jala hai.
- Background: Silence
→ dheere-dheere drum beat start hoti hai.
- Action: Lawrence
apna sar neeche jhukaye baitha hai. Dheere se sir uthata hai.
Dialogue (slow, heavy tone):
"Sunte reh… jisne bhi kale hirna ko goli maari na… usne sirf ek jaanwar
nahi maara, usne meri kaum ka dil cheer diya."
Build
Up (0:30 – 1:15)
- Camera: Close-up
on Lawrence’s eyes. Aankhen laal aur gusse se bhari.
- Lighting: Bulb
ke light se shadow ban rahi hai. Half face light, half dark.
- Background: Tabla
+ drums gradually build up.
Dialogue (voice rising):
"Tu sochta hai tu shikari hai… par shikar tu khud ban chuka hai.
Meri kaum ke liye kale hirna sirf ek jaanwar nahi hai, woh bhagwan hai.
Aur bhagwan pe haath uthana matlab Lawrence Bishnoi ke khilaf jang
kholna."
Peak
Intensity (1:15 – 2:00)
- Camera: Dolly-in
(slow zoom) → Lawrence khada hota hai.
- Action: Uske
haath kaap rahe hain, gusse se cheekhta hai.
- Background: High-pitched
dhol + faint temple bell echo (religious emotion).
Dialogue (loud, fiery):
"Jo bhi kale hirna pe goli chalata hai, main uski saanse tod deta hoon.
Kanoon ke kagaz sirf tareeke hote hain… par Lawrence ka faisla maut hota hai.
Aur yeh faisla main de chuka hoon!"
Emotional
Core (2:00 – 2:30)
- Camera: Side
profile shot. Ek aansu Lawrence ke gaal pe girta hai.
- Lighting: Orange-red
spotlight, jaise aag ki reflection.
- Background: Slow
heartbeat sound effect.
Dialogue (dard aur gusse ka mix):
"Meri kaum ke bhagwan ka khoon bahaane wale…
Tera khoon mitti pe girne tak yeh jang khatam nahi hogi.
Jab tak tu zinda hai… Lawrence Bishnoi chain se nahi baithega."
Climax
(2:30 – 3:00)
- Camera: Extreme
close-up on lips/eyes. Phir cut to full shot (Lawrence saamne chal kar
camera ke kareeb aa jaata hai).
- Background: Drums
+ heartbeat ek saath peak karte hain → sudden silence.
- Lighting: Flash
cut (jaise encounter ka flash).
Dialogue (deadly calm, final blow):
"Kale hirna ki goli chalane wala… ab khud goli khayega.
Aur woh goli, main chalayunga.
Yeh meri kasam hai… Lawrence Bishnoi ki kasam.
Aur meri kasam… kabhi tootti nahi."
Closing
Visual
- Camera: Black
screen.
- Text on screen (yellow bold):
“Power milti hai daam lekar. Shohrat bhi… aur saza bhi.” - Sound: Ek
single gunshot echo. Scene cut.
✅ Ye pura scene breakdown
approx 3-minute runtime cover karta hai.
- Pauses, music cues aur camera angles ke saath.
- Intensity dheere-dheere badh kar climax pe blast karta
hai.
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