TITLE:
“WO GHAR ABHI BHI JAAGTA HAI”
(10 Minutes – Screenplay Style)
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0:00 – 1:00 | OPENING (DEAD SILENCE)
(Halki hawa ki awaaz, door se kutte
ke bhonkne ki sound)
VOICE OVER (bahut dheemi, thandi
awaaz):
Kuch ghar aise hote hain…
jo sirf khaali nahi hote…
wo intezaar karte hain.
Intezaar…
agli saans ka…
agli aahat ka…
aur
agli galti ka.
Ye kahani hai
ek aise ghar ki…
jahan raat kabhi poori nahi hoti.
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1:00 – 2:00 | ENTERING THE PLACE
(Footsteps on dry floor, door
creaking)
VOICE OVER:
Shehar se door…
ek purana ghar tha.
Log kehte the—
“Wahan mat jaana.”
“Raat ke baad wapas koi nahi aaya.”
Par usne socha…
“Kahaniyan to har jagah hoti hain.”
Jaise hi darwaza khula…
ghar ne
saans li.
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2:00 – 3:00 | STRANGE SIGNS
(Clock ticking, faint whisper)
VOICE OVER:
Deewaron par kharoch ke nishaan the…
jaise kisi ne
andar se bahar nikalne ki koshish ki ho.
Ghadi chal rahi thi…
par waqt nahi.
Achaanak…
peeche se awaaz aayi—
“Tum aa gaye…”
(Pause – complete silence)
Par wahan
koi nahi tha.
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3:00 – 4:00 | FIRST FEAR
(Heavy breathing, slow footsteps)
VOICE OVER (nervous tone):
Uske kadam khud-b-khud peeche hatne lage…
lekin darwaza
band tha.
Deewar par latki tasveer me
chehra dheere-dheere
us jaisa hota ja raha tha.
Uska gala sookh gaya…
Aur tab usne mehsoos kiya—
ghar use dekh raha hai.
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4:00 – 5:00 | THE ENTITY
(Low bass sound, whispering voices
together)
VOICE OVER:
Andhere se
kuch nikal raha tha…
Pair zameen par nahi the…
chehra tha…
par aankhen nahi.
Sirf ek awaaz—
“Yahin ruk jao…”
Uska sharir jam chuka tha…
aur dimaag cheekh raha tha.
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5:00 – 6:00 | TRUTH REVEAL
(Heartbeat sound)
VOICE OVER (dark revelation):
Ye ghar pehle bhi logon ka tha…
har saal…
ek naya mehmaan.
Aur sabke saath
ek hi cheez hoti thi—
Wo ghar chhod dete the…
par
ghar unhe kabhi chhodta nahi tha.
Unki aawazein…
unke chehre…
sab deewaron me kaid the.
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6:00 – 7:00 | POSSESSION BEGINS
(Distorted voice, echoes)
VOICE OVER:
Uske haath kaanp rahe the…
par awaaz
ab uski nahi thi.
Aaine me jo dikha…
wo muskuraya…
Aur bola—
“Ab tum meri jagah ho.”
Aankhen apne aap band hone lagi…
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7:00 – 8:00 | ESCAPE ATTEMPT
(Running footsteps, loud breathing)
VOICE OVER (urgent):
Wo bhaaga…
seedhiyan toot rahi thi…
ghar badal raha tha.
Har raasta
wapas usi kamre me aa raha tha.
Aur peeche se
wo awaaz—
“Bhaag kar dikhao…”
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8:00 – 9:00 | FINAL HORROR
(Sudden silence, then one whisper)
VOICE OVER (very slow):
Aakhri darwaza khula…
Bahar subah thi…
roshni thi…
Par jaise hi wo bahar nikla…
ghar ke andar
ek naya frame lag gaya.
Tasveer me
uska chehra tha.
Aur neeche likha tha—
“Agla mehmaan jald aa raha hai.”
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9:00 – 10:00 | ENDING (CHILLING CLOSE)
(Wind sound, ensure silence between
lines)
VOICE OVER:
Aaj bhi…
wo ghar wahan khada hai.
Log kehte hain
raat ko wahan se awaaz aati hai—
“Darwaza khula hai…”
Agar kabhi
aapko bhi
ye awaaz sunai de…
(pause – 5 seconds)
to yaad rakhna—
👉 ghar khaali nahi hai.
(One loud knock sound — CUT TO
BLACK)
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