🎬 Title: “Barf Ke Neeche”
🎯 Genre
Thriller / Suspense / Mystery-Drama
🎭 Casting (suggested for Hindi film)
Irfan Pathan type intense face actor (or Vikrant Massey) – Kabir Singh Rathod (Protagonist – Ex-cop)
Radhika Apte – Naina Sharma (Journalist)
Pankaj Tripathi – Inspector Dhamre (Grey-shade cop)
Konkona Sen Sharma – Dr. Rukhsar Ali (Psychologist)
Jitendra Joshi – Sahir Khan (Mysterious Stranger)
📝 Concept
Ek remote hill-station me 7 saal purani ek murder case freeze ho gayi thi – literally, kyunki laash ek glacier ke andar chhup gayi thi. Jab glacier pighalna shuru hota hai, laash milti hai, aur saath milta hai ek secret camera ka memory card. Isme sirf 5 tasveer hai… lekin har photo ek nayi maut ki taraf le jaati hai.
📖 Story Outline
- Kabir, ek ex-cop jo PTSD se guzar raha hai, ek hill-station me shant zindagi jeene aaya hai.
- Naina, ek daring journalist, us glacier murder story ko cover karne aati hai.
- Memory card ke photos me har shakhs ek alag-alag location me dikhta hai — aur jaise hi wo tasveer dekhe jaate hain, wo log ek-ek karke mar jaate hain.
- Inspector Dhamre ke andar ek secret hai — wo murder ka asli gavaah tha.
- Dr. Rukhsar ko pata hai ki ye case sirf physical nahi, psychological trap hai.
- Sahir Khan, jo photo me ek baar bhi nahi dikhta, asal me mastermind hai.
🎬 Screenplay (Scene Flow)
Scene 1 – Opening
- Wide shot of Himalayan glacier melting — camera drone shot.
- Ice ke andar se ek skeleton dikh raha hai.
- Local police excavation. Ek cop camera memory card uthata hai, aur kaan ke paas se awaaz: "Woh tumhe dekh rahe hain..."
Scene 2 – Kabir intro
- Kabir ek dhaba me chai pee raha hai. Piche radio pe murder case ki news.
- Naina enters, uske table par jaake baithti hai:
- Naina: “Tum yahan sirf chai peene aaye ho, ya sach me bhoolne?”
- Kabir: “Main sirf un chehron se door hoon, jo mar gaye… aur jinhein main bacha nahi paaya.”
Scene 3 – First Photo Clue
- Naina laptop pe photo open karti hai: ek abandoned church ka pic.
- Us raat church me fire lagta hai, aur ek witness mar jata hai.
- Kabir ko lagta hai koi coincidence nahi.
Scene 4 – Tension Build-Up
- Har photo ek future location dikhata hai — jahan agli maut hoti hai.
- Kabir aur Naina har location pe pahunchne ki koshish karte hain, par hamesha 5 minute late.
Scene 5 – The Twist Reveal
- Memory card asli me Sahir ne banwaya tha — har photo staged hai.
- Ye ek psychological test tha Kabir ko mentally break karne ke liye, kyunki 7 saal pehle Kabir ne Sahir ki behen ko encounter me maar diya tha.
Scene 6 – Climax
- Snowstorm me Kabir aur Sahir ka face-off.
- Naina camera chalati hai — proof collect hota hai.
- Kabir Sahir ko maar deta hai… lekin final shot me ek aur memory card table pe rakha hota hai — jis pe Kabir ka khud ka photo hai.
🎥 Short Script Sample – Climax Scene
EXT. SNOWSTORM – NIGHT
White-out conditions. Kabir haath me gun, Sahir chhupkar ghoom raha hai.
Sahir (voice over, echo in storm):
"Tumne meri behen ko maar ke socha sab khatam ho gaya?"
Kabir:
"Main tujhe tab bhi nahi jaanta tha… ab bhi nahi jaanna chahta."
Suddenly, Sahir appears behind. Fist fight in snow, camera shakes. Naina records from distance.
Sahir:
"Aakhri photo dekh, Kabir."
Throws memory card in snow.
Kabir shoots Sahir. Sahir falls back into snow, blood mixes with ice.
Naina picks up card, inserts into camera — ek hi photo: Kabir, yahi jagah, yahi raat.
CUT TO BLACK.
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