Genre: Drama / Slice of Life / Emotional Family Story
Tone: Emotional, Poetic, and Realistic
Target: Festival circuit + OTT audience
Concept
Ek chhoti si railway basti mein ek school teacher apni patni ke guzar jaane ke baad apne bete ko akela paal raha hai. Zindagi ka bojh, sapno ka wazan, aur samaj ki soch—sab ke beech ek aadmi ka apne bete ke liye khud ko tod dena.
Story ek emotional father-son relationship explore karegi, jismein love bolne se zyada chhupane mein hota hai.
Online-style Short Story
"Railway basti ka Raghunath ek simple school teacher hai. Patni ke death ke baad, uski duniya sirf ek chehre tak simat gayi — uske chhote bete Manav tak. Lekin paison ki kami, society ka pressure, aur apne sapno ko dabaane ki majboori, uske andar ek chup ka dard bhar deti hai. Jab Manav ek drawing competition ke liye city jana chahta hai, to Raghunath ko apni purani yaadon ka samna karna padta hai—aur decide karna padta hai ki zindagi apne sapno ke liye jeeni hai ya apne bete ke sapno ke liye."
Full Scene-by-Scene Script & Screenplay (Roman Hindi)
Scene 1 – Early Morning in Basti
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Location: Railway basti, chhota ghar
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Visuals: Steam wali chai, poora basti halki dhoop me, background me train ki awaaz.
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Action:
Raghunath ek purani wooden table pe baitha, school ke papers check kar raha hai.
Manav ek drawing bana raha hai.
Dialogue:
Manav: Papa, agar main yeh drawing competition jeet gaya to humko city me bulaenge.
Raghunath: (halki muskaan ke saath) Pehle yeh homework complete kar, phir jeet lena poora sheher.
Scene 2 – School Staff Room
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Location: Government School staff room
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Action: Teachers apne pay cut ki baatein kar rahe hain, Raghunath chup hai.
Dialogue:
Teacher 1: Raghu, tumhara ladka drawing me accha hai na? Bhej do usko competition me.
Raghunath: (nazar jhuka ke) Paise ka intezam kaun karega?
Scene 3 – Flashback of Wife
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Visuals: Raat ka time, patni bed pe drawing bana rahi hai, and Raghu dekhta hai.
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Dialogue (VO):
Patni (VO): Raghu, sapne bade hote hain, par unko jeena chhote chhote kadam se padta hai.
Scene 4 – Decision
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Location: Basti ke railway track ke paas bench
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Action: Raghu khud ka ek purana radio bech deta hai taaki ticket kharid sake.
Scene 5 – Train Journey
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Visuals: Father-son train me, Manav window se baahar ka aasmaan dekhta hai.
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Dialogue:
Manav: Papa, aasmaan ka rang peela kyun lagta hai?
Raghunath: Kyunki jab sapne sach hone lagte hain, rang badal jaate hain.
Scene 6 – Competition Hall
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Action: Manav stage pe drawing bana raha hai, and Raghu door se dekh raha hai.
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Background: me, sirf pencil ki khar-khar ki awaaz, and Raghu ki aankhon me aansu.
Scene 7 – Climax
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Action: Result announce hota hai, Manav jeet jata hai. Raghu seedha usse gale lagata hai, kuch nahi bolta.
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Visuals: Stage lights, slow-motion hug.
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Dialogue (VO):
Raghunath: Kabhi kabhi apne sapno se bada hota hai apne bachche ka sapna.
Scene 8 – Ending
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Visuals: Train wapas basti aa rahi hai, Manav ke haath me trophy. Raghu khidki ke bahar peele rang ka aasmaan dekh raha hai.
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