🎬 Screenplay: “Saaf Saans”
Genre: Social / Environmental Drama
Duration: ~30 min
Theme: Pollution, Plastic, Climate Change
ACT 1 – Introduction (0–8 min)
Scene 1 – Opening Montage (3 min)
– City shots: traffic jam, black smoke from chimneys, overflowing plastic dumps, children coughing with masks.
– Camera focuses on Kabir (12), a boy struggling to breathe through an inhaler.
Narration (VO):
“Zindagi ki sabse badi daulat hai hawa… aur humne use bhi zeher bana diya.”
Scene 2 – Kabir’s Home (5 min)
– Kabir’s mother cries while doctor explains:
Doctor: “Aapke bete ka asthma pollution se badh raha hai. Agar hawa badli nahi… toh zindagi mushkil hogi.”
– Mother helplessly looks out window: nearby garbage burning, thick smoke rising.
ACT 2 – Conflict Builds (8–18 min)
Scene 3 – School Project (5 min)
– Teacher assigns project: “Ek kaam batao jo environment ke liye kar sakte ho.”
– Kabir suggests “plastic hatao.” Class laughs at his weak voice.
Scene 4 – Ground Reality (5 min)
– Kabir walks with friend through city:
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River full of plastic bottles.
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Dead fish floating.
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Trees cut for construction.
– Friend: “Sab waste hai… kuch badalne wala nahi.”
– Kabir silently picks up bottles, starts collecting.
Scene 5 – Father’s Conflict (5 min)
– Kabir’s father works in a plastic factory.
– Argues with mother: “Agar plastic bandh hua toh ghar kaise chalega?”
– Kabir overhears, feels torn between health & family survival.
ACT 3 – Turning Point (18–26 min)
Scene 6 – Kabir’s Initiative (6 min)
– Kabir organizes a cleanliness drive with school kids.
– Small start: collecting bottles, planting saplings.
– Social media video of kids goes viral.
Narration (VO):
“Bade badlaav aksar chhote haathon se shuru hote hain.”
Scene 7 – Father’s Realisation (2 min)
– Father sees Kabir struggling for breath after drive.
– Quits job at plastic factory, joins municipal eco-project.
– Family supports Kabir’s mission.
ACT 4 – Climax & Resolution (26–30 min)
Scene 8 – Green Hope (4 min)
– One year later: small park where once garbage dump stood.
– Kabir runs, breathes deep without inhaler, smiles.
– School children play around, posters: “Say No to Plastic, Yes to Life.”
Voice Over:
“Jahan hawa saaf hoti hai, wahin zindagi muskurati hai.
Prithvi maa ko bachana hai… taaki har bacha saaf saans le sake.”
Screen fades with text:
“Our planet, our responsibility. Stop plastic. Save future.”
⏳ Duration Calculation
- Act 1: 8 min
- Act 2: 10 min
- Act 3: 8 min
- Act 4: 4 min
Total: ~30 min
👉 Ye tha Environment (Pollution, Plastic, Climate Change) par screenplay.
🎙 Narration Script – “Saaf Saans”
(Background: soft flute + subtle environmental sounds – wind, coughing, birds fading into traffic noise)
Opening (0–3 min)
“Hawa… jo kabhi sabse saaf, sabse pyari daulat thi… aaj dhundh ban chuki hai.
Bachpan ki khelti hansi ab mask ke peeche chhup gayi hai.
Aur ek chhota sa bacha, Kabir… roz apni saans ke liye ladta hai.”
Kabir’s Home (3–8 min)
“Doctor kehte hain – ‘Agar hawa na badli… toh zindagi mushkil hogi.’
Maa ki aankhon mein aansu hain… aur khidki ke bahar… jalta hua kachra, dhuaan, aur insaan ki laaparwahi.
Socho… jahan ek bachcha jeene ke liye hawa ko tarse… wahan hamara bhavishya kaisa hoga?”
School Project (8–13 min)
“School mein teacher kehti hain – ‘Environment ke liye ek kaam batao.’
Kabir kehta hai – ‘Plastic hatao.’
Sab hans dete hain uski kamzor awaaz par… par usi awaaz mein ek sach छुपा hai, jo duniya ko jagana chaahta hai.”
Ground Reality (13–18 min)
“Naadiyaan jo kabhi jeevan ka srot thi… ab plastic ki laashon se bhari hain.
Ped jo kabhi chhaya dete the… ab kaate ja rahe hain.
Machhliyaan, pakshi, janwar… sab insaan ki beparwahi se mar rahe hain.
Aur hum kehte hain – ‘Sab waste hai, kuch badalne wala nahi.’
Par Kabir… ek chhota sa bacha… rukta nahi. Wo plastic uthaata hai, bottlen jama karta hai, aur ek misaal banata hai.”
Father’s Conflict (18–20 min)
“Kabir ka pita… jo plastic factory mein kaam karta hai… kehta hai – ‘Agar plastic bandh hua, toh roti kaise chalegi?’
Ghar ki roti aur hawa ki saafgi ke beech ek ladai hai.
Par Kabir jaanta hai… roti tabhi hai jab saans hai.”
Kabir’s Initiative (20–24 min)
“Chhote chhote haathon se ek safai abhiyan shuru hota hai.
School ke bachche, teacher, kuch log judte hain.
Ek video viral hota hai.
Aur log samajhte hain – ‘Bade badlaav… aksar chhoti awaazon se shuru hote hain.’”
Father’s Realisation (24–26 min)
“Jab Kabir saans ke liye phir se tadapta hai… pita ke dil ki deewar gir jaati hai.
Wo apna plastic factory ka kaam chhod kar… eco-project join karta hai.
Pehli baar… ek pita apne bete se seekhta hai.”
Closing (26–30 min)
“Ek saal baad… wahi jagah jahan kabhi kachra tha… ab ek park hai.
Pedon ki chhaya, machhliyon ka khelna, bachchon ki hansi… aur Kabir ki ek gehri saaf saans.
Zindagi wahi hai jahan hawa saaf hai.
Prithvi maa ko bachana hai… kyunki agar saans hi nahi bachi… toh sab kuch khatam ho jaayega.
Saaf saans… hamara adhikaar bhi hai, aur zimmedari bhi.”
(Screen fade to black – text appears: “Our planet, our responsibility. Stop plastic. Save future.”)
👉 Ye narration with pauses & background emotion easily 30 min runtime cover karega.
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